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  • Real: Ch 08

    This chapter we skip straight to Austin.  Because…apparently Brooke did nothing else to look for her sister that she was just so concerned about? In case anyone was curious, Brooke is still horny.  I know you guys were wondering about that.  I mean, she has so many other interests, after all.  But fear not, she…

  • Real: Ch 07

    We skip ahead to the next leg of their tour as they go from Miami to Denver.  …I looked ahead a bit, and their next two stops are Austin and Chicago.  Who planned this tour? Normally you go in a circle or some other sort of order, so that you’re not having to do quite…

  • Real: Ch 06

    “Fix my wrist for me.” […] “Put a song on for me,” I really don’t understand the appeal of these two characters/their ‘relationship.’  Not because he of any personality flaw on his end, but because as far as I can tell he has no personality.  All of the dialogue between them reads like this.  Very…

  • Real: Ch 05

    Trigger warning: this post spends a great deal of time talking about human trafficking. During this next fight, Brooke’s seat is right next to the two hookers that were hanging around last night.  They’re named Friday and Debbie and seem to be chill, probably escorts and/or strippers rather than streetwalkers, although that doesn’t excuse my…

  • Real: Ch 04

    I sit among the spectators at the Atlanta Underground Seriously, book, WHAT IS THIS?  I don’t get it.  I don’t know what she’s talking about.  There has not been enough context for me to tell what’s going on with this ‘underground’ business.  It reads like something the author misunderstood, and so she’s presenting it as…